Peer Review

Ling
I like the way that it was written in scrap book style the animation is amazing! You may need to explain your home page a little more. In the environmental page you should explain how that breeds a sense of home. Perhaps include less facts and more emotion. I like the thumb tacks and scissors, you stylistically keep an ongoing theme which is good. Small grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed.

John
Your project has a very sitcomy feel to it, the perfect family. When looking at the first page of your project from the start I feel like i am a viewer about to be introduced to the characters of your family. Cara the sister is very cliche on the phone, you see the suburbia in the back ground. In the T.V picture perhaps bring in a specific memory. Although, I like the play on words making your T.V your best friend. I like the angular view of the photo. The Tali picture the relationship from that picture is ambiguous is that what you wanted.

Nikki

Your opening page is very book like. There are a lot of cutesy metaphors. I like the way she asks questions to the audience and gives them choices. In the Barbie picture the photo itself is very colorful and appealing to the eye. I think that the narrative is a little to long. The Blockbuster shot I like the double shot. Although the text is a little hard to read. i like the way it leads into the other photos.

Nicole

Your opening page intrigues me because I don't know that many only children. I am wanting to know more about the dynamic of your family. The Mr. Bear picture was an interesting way to pose a stuffed animal. The Matt picture poses two different cultures coming together perhaps you can elaborate on that. Also elaborate on the type of relationship.