Wednesday, May 02, 2007

Ling's Home.

I like Ling's introduction, it's really good. I love the style of writing he uses, it reminds me of a long time ago when thos people in the 19th century would write in their diary, however with his up to date pictures e.g. computers, iPods bring us back to this generation.

The image of a tree that looks like the flowers are missing is strange to me, I just don't know what it's supposed to represent. I thought that the text for the pictures was just Ling describing the atmosphere of where he lived at the time. However I agree with Jennifer when she said that he should've described what the pictures are personally to him.

For Ling's Spring picture, it was very blue but it looked a little cold. When I read the text I thought he should've elaborated a bit more or have a picture of the balloon festival that he wrote about.

When I first saw the picture of the computer of Ling's computer, it looked a little blurry and I couldn't make out what it said. When I read the text, I thought that Ling REALLY liked his computer a lot. It was very interesting to see and read.

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