Karen's Home

I like your opening picture, because it's miserable and finally we figure out that picture is taken in a rainy day while you driving, maybe you can make it bigger, so audience can see it better. You did the good job on how to position these pictures, but from the test, I can't seem how is that connect to your home. I like your third image, which shows your couch. You mention your apartment is small, so couch become your important place for doing everything. For text part, it's easy let audience understand your feeling about the couch. I really like the pictures shows you and your friend's laptop, and TV set in the background, the only critique is you can make text more specific.