Karen's home project

I really liked your project. It had an iteresting mood to it. The pictures had a gloomy, dark atmosphere, I really liked that. I was interested because your text was very cheery, I'm not sure if that was intentional, but it was intersting. What went well also was that the comparison of the picture and text, as well as the back round. The colors faded from a dark blue to a bright yellow, following the theme. I think that a lot of the text needs more. I think that there is a lot to work with with the pictures and your stories, you just have to provide that. The couch picture worked. I got the feeling that you spend all of your time on there and it looks fun and cozy. Overall, the text needs to draw me in and stay interested, rather than telling me facts about a story that I was not apart of; I need to feel a connection to the story or object.