Karen's Home

Karen opens with a gloomy picture taken during a stormy night with a 7-11 in the distant view. When reading the text the picture didn't really make a connection to it, since in the she sounded cheerful introducing herself. I like the way she showed us how when moving to Queens from Monsey she still feels like shes at home. The picture of the 7-11 helps the viewer understand it alot better.
The picture welcomes us into her apartment in Queens where the door looks slightly open expressing us that we are welcomed. She then tells us the story how when she moved in they didn't realize it had to be build which they had to do with friends. It seems very factual but you might think about making it a little more descriptive. In her final picture Karen shows us her point of view of her couch, I find the picture very fascinating since she also shows us some clever frame work showing us pictures in different frames. The way she set it up was also very clever showing us that the laptops with the pictures of her and her friends are infront of the TV shows us how to her friends come before the outside world. It was a very fasinating presentation and the pictures were great but you should think about how to make the text more descriptive than factual.