Karen's presentation by: Eddie

Karen:
You did a good job on your presentation but your opening page gave me a feeling of “midnight” and it was also a gloomy feeling which did not match your happy writing. I thought that your other pictures were a bit more interesting such as the door to your apartment and the couch. Maybe you should think about switching your home page picture because I found myself really intrigued by the open door picture and not so much by the 7/11 picture. My favorite photograph was the couch. I thought you did a great job showing your point of view and I felt that because of the way the picture was taken and because of your writing I was starting to understand your concept of home more clearly. You gave us an idea of home by explaining how this couch was so comfortable and relaxing so I thought that this is what home means to you. I especially enjoyed the line “I do all my assignments here including this one.” The writing that you used made the audience feel like they were a part of your home so I thought that you did a great job doing so. I think that your pictures were good but remember to improve your homepage, other than that you did a great job.