My first thoughts of Karen's home was blue. The picture showed that she was in her car and perhaps it was raining. This reminded me of something cold, however I was surprised to see that it wasn't a fountain because it sure looked that way to me. The text was not exactly linking to the image in the way that I thought that it would. The look of the project, however was gloomy but the text was bubbly and cheerful. The text was a little boring, she could have said more expressive colorful words to keep my attention.
The second picture was very strange, the door was open and a leg of some sort was showing, however the audience doesn't know whose own it is. I feel that the audience is there and that she's talking to us.
The third image was good, it shows that she has fun with her friends on this couch. The couch sort of becomes like the dining table where everyone meets. The text shows me that she's talking to us all because we know that just by the simple words she uses to communicate with us.
My critique for her would be to just lighten her photos a bit and add a little more contrast to them, othewise GREAT JOB!!!!!!
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