I like the way you opened showing cut up pictures of yourself and also showing us your textbooks showing us your studiousness and how much they are a part of your life. One can tell how studious you are by quoting that sociologist showing your compassion towards her academics. Your links are very creative as well by making the viewer really feel like their decision matters. You then lead us to your Barbie doll collection which helps us see your youthful side. To it shows you want to take the viewer back to a simpler time which is why you named it “a time when I wasn’t stress” very clever.
It’s nice to know that you feel your work place to be like a second home to you, when most people hate that fact of even going to there. It shows character especially how you mentioned the fun you have there. I enjoyed the way you formatted your presentation very clever.
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