You open up in a very interesting way by giving the viewer a background of where you’ve lived in the past and how it has helped you grown. I think it’d bring the viewer more in if you would include a little more detail. The background and technical features you included where amazing, I couldn’t even imagine doing that. I enjoyed how you cleverly put your project into a scrap book version, which is basically what the project is about a scrap book of what is home to you. In your second picture you show us the difference between the plants of the east coast to the plants of the west coast. It fascinates me being that I have lived in the east coast all of my life, and have never really been in contact with many western plants it also shows us that there are things that you miss from your time living in the east coast.
Your picture of spring helps us understand what kind of person you are, to many spring feels fresh, a new start to things as well, as clean. The pictures really do help illustrate your true appreciation towards spring. The picture of the computer helps us understand your true appreciation towards computers, and how they are a part of his life. Your presentation was great and the theme and settings where also amazing, the only thing you should think about is adding some more information at the opening page.
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