Home Project 2nd

Thanks for your guys criticism.

John:
John's opening page is great, show his family members focus on something. Everyone's position is well, because your parents sitting in the front; and your little sister standing there, and we can see her; you and your brother after your parents. It's really give audients some attention about how your family act as a group. Then shows your sister Cara, she was on the phone, I like the way you call her "Oh my god" because it's seems very familiarity.About your and your friend Tali's picture, I think it's really cool, I like the way your catch the best scene with her. Good job.

Nikki:
Your project is really good, I like it very much. First, I like the way you present your "elements", it's really a cool idea, that shows you are a good designer. Color and location is good too; Second, you have good introducation in the opening page, that lead audients can easily concentrate on what you are saying. I like your second picture too, because the notebook in the picture is kind of design, it took me for a while to figure out what it's. third, you feel very open to audients to visit your page, like "welcome", "How do you want to know about me?" it's very confident questions. I also like the way you text relate to your picture, like the barbie one, it give the right position where audients are. overall, it's a excellent work, and give me some hints how to make this project better, just dont get butterflies in your stomach, you are doing great.

Nicole
I like your opening picture because first feeling for me is "sweet", it shows your parents are very important to you. You are the only child in your family, that's interesting for people to konw how was your life going. I really like your Mr. Bear's picture. It's very organize picture, shows your room, your Mr. Bear, I think he is your best friend since you are only child at home, in the other way, I don't know if you like kids or not. Then you show your boyfriend Mat's picture, it's very nice because he is part of your life, and you really should put something you have meet in Irasel in the text because i thought it's very interesting for audients. :)