I love Ling's new intro, it's great and very creative. The text was a little hard to read at times. It's ironic that he would say that he doesn't like Chinatown. The image of the bust stop was great, however I would have loved to see him actually wait by the bus stop, when his food slide came on, he could've actually had himself partaking of the food. The music is sad like he lost his one true love or someone either died. The ceramic photo is great, I want one just like it.
I believe Ling's text was totally different from his music and pictures, it seemed that he hated music at the beginning, however a better choiced instrumental would have been key in this situation.
The photography slide show was very hard to read, because his contrast with the text color and the text background was way off.
The text for night fall was very emotional; it showed a softer side to LIng so GOOD JOB BUDDY!!!!!
His punctuation for the Ceramic slide needs some work.
I liked that he made his slide show sort of like a notebook; it looked like he was entering a journalism or diary piece which in turn made the audience feel a little closer to him, so he connected with the audience on that aspect.
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