Peer Review

Matt "Shemmy"
I like the opening picture the music showa emotion it was a nice touch. It is also a playful touch to pick a more funloving picture of him and his fiance. Your project is mor eof an offering to the audience which I like. In the picture "why i came to N.Y" I was wondering how the band connected to the church you helped build. Maybe talk more specifically about the religion. "Friends I cam to New York With" I like the black and white picture, it was something new. I thought it was intriguing how a married couple took you in maybe specify what you want us to get out of the photo. In the photo "other friends" what makes this picture special.

Safia
I misread the opening image not as something portraying a relationship, but something more indavidual. It could be more personal if you include a picture of your sister aswell. The picture showing the relationship with your sister was staged very well and I liked the relationship it portrayed. The Trinbagonian flag picture seems a little unnatural the way it was cropped. Perhaps clarify some of the things you talk about in that picture.

Eddie "Shpya"
I like the use of the different language, but perhaps a translation so we are not all so confused. I like your opening photo looks like fun. In the picture of your family does the cold have something to do with your family what is important to you? You need to draw the audience in more perhaps an example or a story.