Nicole

I love the title and cover of your project. The mixed up photos of pieces of your face shows the different sides to you that we can see if we chose to. You mentioned this in your first paragraph which particularly connects to the reader because they begin to question what they look at in a person. I like the way you welcome the readers in bold letters and continue that into the paragraph. You are luring your audience into wanting to get to know you better. When you ask the question at the end, before the links, "How do you want to know me?" you bring up a major question in the readers mind. What we chose as the link to go to shows you what we look at first in a person. We as a class chose the title "when my life wasn't stressed." This brings us into the start of your life which is a great place to start learning about you. The fact that the last time you weren't stressed was that long ago shows that school work and the responsibilities of a young adult are a handful to you. The blockbuster page is my favorite. The way you compare your Lucy to be your blockbuster mom shows that this is no longer just a job for you it means so much more. It is not about the paycheck or the movie perks. You have developed a family in your workplace which shows character about you as well.