Ling

The technology used in your project was overly impressive. I like the way you made you made the pages look like a scrapbook using tools such as a pencil and thumb tacks. The images you used as your links also brought a lot of character and color to your pages. Your images are great and your paragraphs have nice information in them but some more connection to the photos might help the audience grasp the theme better. The image of environment was beautiful. I would like to know more about why spring is home for you. The image of spring is really nice too. I like how you speak about the hot air balloon festival because it gives the audience more information than they were able to get from the photo. The angle as which you took of the computer screen was my favorite page. You have a relationship with technology that is unique about you. The image makes me think that your perspective on computers is that you respect and look up to them or that the laptop is being thrown around in which case you don't really care much about it.