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Ling

First of all, the design was great of course. The first thing I noticed was the pen and how you make your page look like a scrapbook you had put together. The way that the links were the pictures for the next page was also amazing. The enviroment pictures were a good representation of west vs. east in regards to plant life. The problem I have is that the dialogue is factual and I dont get a sense of home. The word overlay on your next picture is great. I thought the dialogue for the spring picture shows how much you enjoy spring, very good I thought. Your next picture of the computer shows how much you appreciate computers simply by the angle of the picture. I wish that you didnt abbreviate so much being that some people will have no idea what you are talking about.

John

John's idea of home revolves around his family. His picture shows his family but the focus actually seems to be on a magazine in the front. The dialogue is very good, you put us on the outside looking in, like we are watching a tv show. The picture of Cara shows she is always on the phone and doesnt seem to care what else is going on. I especially liked the Andy Griffith picture because that show was back in the 50's, where families were like yours. The page with Tali should be named the same as the link you used. I got a sense of a good relationship between you two from the picture and the dialogue as well.

Nikki

First of all I thought the design was amazing, especially for a word document. Your title shows that we will be talking about different elements of yourself. The fact that Welcome You is the biggest font on the page shows that we are invited to take part in your page. You are very good at engaging the audience by asking good questions. I like how you lead the audience to your links. I personally didnt get the Blockbuster pictures but it seems like everyone else did. I did like how you related your work to home.

Nicole

I liked the opening picture because it showed your parents and how happy they still are. They are obviously a big part of your sense of home. The text to me was dull and boring, it was just information, I didnt really get too excited while reading. The fact that you wrote in the 2nd person shows that you were trying to get us involved which was nice. The picture of the bear shows the good relationship you have with him and goes well with the diaologue. I also thought the picture of Matt was good and went well with the dialogue.